Hi my name is Sophie. This is my galaxy ice-cream bar. Well you are probably wondering why I'm showing you this video it's because room five are reading Charlie and the Chocolate factory. then we had to make our own sweet treat or savoury treat and try to sale it to Mr Willy Wonka.
Hi Sophie it's Chido from Awahono I liked how you told them how much flavor it has.
ReplyDeleteHi Chido thanks for the lovely comment.
DeleteHi Sophie it's Amelia here, I like how you showed us a picture of your invention. Next time make sure all the writing is spelt right in your blurb. Great job from Amelia.
ReplyDeleteThanks Amelia for the lovely feedback.
ReplyDeleteHi, Sophie. My name is Will from Kokatahi-Kowhitirangi School. The galaxy ice cream bar sounds cool and if it was a thing I think that whoever made it, would be making a lot of them. You spelt chocolate choclit by the way so next time spell it like chocolate. However, it was good. Thanks, Will
ReplyDeleteHi Sophie,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for sharing. Are you able to explain what made you choose to invent this product? I love the colour you have used, it really grabs my attention.
Kind Regards,
Mrs B.